An argumentative essay should
normally finish with a conclusion and sometimes, depending on the subject, with
conclusions and recommendations. The conclusions and recommendations (if there
are any) should be placed in the last paragraph(s).
Good conclusions are often
difficult to write. It is best to leave them until you have finished the first
draft of the paper, so that you have a complete sense of the argument as you
have presented it. Now you are ready to leave the reader with some final
concluding thoughts.
In thinking about how to write a
conclusion, you might benefit from considering the following ideas:
1. The conclusion should not
continue the argument by introducing new material. It is a place to sum up the
argument which has come to an end in the final paragraph of the main body of
the argument. Hence, you should never introduce new points in the conclusion.
2. The main purpose of the conclusion
is to sum up the argument, to re-emphasize the thesis, and to leave the reader
thinking about the importance of the argument, perhaps in a wider context. In a
sense, its purpose is the reverse of the introduction: the conclusion moves the
reader from the particular emphasis of the argument and takes it out into a
wider context (if this seems confusing, check some of the examples below).
3. There are a number of things a
writer should be careful not to do in the concluding paragraph. You should not,
as mentioned, suddenly introduce a new point, nor should you disqualify the
argument you have just presented with a comment like "But all this is just
my opinion," or "But I really don't know that much about the
subject." Make sure the conclusion is a confident reassertion of the main
point of the argument.
4. Here are some things you might
do in a conclusion: you can sum up the argument you have conducted and
re-emphasize the thesis you set down at the beginning, you can move back from
the specific focus and place the argument in a larger context (see example
below), you can leave the reader with some specific recommendations or
questions to think about, or you can point to the future and invite the reader
to consider what you have said in that context.
Here are some sample conclusions.
Notice how the writer does not continue the argument (which is over) but tends
to draw back to place the issue in a wider perspective and, at the same time,
to reinforce for the reader the central argument which the essay has been
presenting.
Conclusion C (from an essay arguing that the only rational
solution to our narcotics problem is to legalize all drugs)
Surely it's time we recognized the
facts of life: that our efforts to stamp out illegal narcotics are only
succeeding in enriching organized crime, providing the police with dangerous
new powers, filling our prisons with young people, and encouraging many others
to break the law. And, as I have mentioned, we need to remember that the
narcotics we are trying to stamp out are less dangerous than many legal
substances in widespread use. So instead of devising new utopian and
increasingly expensive and futile schemes to eliminate drugs, we should move at
once to change the law and to make cocaine, heroin, marijuana, and their
derivatives as legal as tobacco, alcohol, Valium, and Ritalin.
Notice carefully what each writer
does in the above samples.