Causal Analysis (Chapter 9, 406-451)
Essay Assignment: to focus on a particular topic (a behavior, event, or trend), discover a possible cause, and then develop an argument in favor of that particular cause.
1. Is lively and interesting
2. Has an effective and catchy lead-in
3. Contains a thesis statement that tells the significance of the memory
4. Contains at least 3 sentences of background information leading up to the thesis
5. Grabs the reader’s attention with the first sentence
6. Begins with a lively and focused topic sentence that relates directly to the thesis
7. Contains at least three supporting sentences
8. Organizes the information and material in a logical way so that one idea or thought naturally follows another, and makes sense to the reader
9. Uses a variety of transitions that unify the paragraph
10. Contains imagination (figurative language, sensory appeal, etc.) that paints a word picture for the reader
11. Uses strong action verbs rather than “being” verbs
12. Is focused and never strays from its purpose
13. Does not ramble
14. Keeps its audience in mind
15. Ends with an effective concluding statement that clearly ends the paragraph and prepares the reader for the next one
16. Leaves the reader with a sense of completion
17. Contains no irrelevant or trivial information
18. Relates directly back to the introduction and thesis
19. Summarizes in some way the significance of the essay
Other Objectives
20. Have an appropriate title that hints at or suggests the content of the paper
21. Contain sentences that are varied in length and structure
22. Contain no run-on sentences or sentence fragments
23. Have no errors in mechanics, spelling and punctuation
24. Clearly communicate the writer’s intended meaning without awkwardness in organization or expression of idea
25. Contain words that are chosen for precise denotation, connotation, and tone
1. correct pronoun usage and antecedents
b) correct word usage (there/their)
2. correct word choice (no vague and unclear words, a lot, things, etc.)
Reading # 1 --- “Throwing Up Childhood” 416-420
JE #1---answer questions 4 and 5 under from Exploring Ideas, AND complete your journal with one of the two prompts from Ideas for Writing,
OR choose a prompt from Point of Contact suggestions (pages 432-433)
JE #2—answer questions 1, 2, and 3 from Exploring Ideas, AND choose one of the two prompts from Ideas for Writing, (415)
OR choose a prompt from Point of Contact suggestions (pages 432-433)
JE #3 --- answer questions 3 and 4 under Writing
Strategies: AND complete the entry with
1 OR 2 from Ideas for Writing,
OR with a prompt from Point of Contact suggestions (432-433)
Reading # 4 --- “When Bright Girls Decide That Math is a Waste of Time” 426-429
JE #4 --- answer questions 1 and 2 from Writing Strategies AND complete with 1 or 2 from Ideas for Writing OR
A choice from Point of Contact prompts
IF YOU FAIL TO BE STIMULATED BY ANY OF THE PROMPTS FROM IDEAS FOR WRITING OR POINT OF CONTACT, YOU MAY SELECT A CHOICE OF YOUR OWN, SUBJECT TO APPROVAL FROM INSRUCTOR.
Complete Thesis and Essay Plan
Compose Rough Draft
Response(s)
Final draft submission